This is the first text:
Hey hey, Onicks here from collins ecom team. I noticed you’ve scheduled a call with me at 4:00 PM on Friday to learn more about our ecom marketing process, looking forward to connecting with you! 🤝
This would be my take:
Hey hey, Onicks here from the Collins Ecom team. I noticed you’ve scheduled a call with me at 4:00 PM on Friday to learn more about our ecom marketing process, looking forward to connecting with you! 🤝
Text 2
was just reading over the application you submitted and It seems there’s a definite possibility for us to help out here. Could you expand abit on the problem you’re currently facing?
My take: (very minor adjustment)
was just reading over the application you submitted and It seems there’s a definite possibility for us to help out here. Could you expand a bit on the problem you’re currently facing?